on friday i went with my friend in the college to cockatoo island. It's beautiful. I went on the ferry maybe for 15 min from circular quay to cockatoo island . i saw too many cockatoo with 50 people and stay maybe one hour in the island
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you should go to cockatoo island
(O)n (F)riday (I) went with my friend(s) (from) the college to (C)ockatoo (I)sland. It's beautiful. I went on the ferry maybe for 15 min from (C)ircular (Q)uay to (C)ockatoo (I)sland . (I) saw too many cockatoo(s) with 50 people and (we)stay(ed for) maybe one hour (on) the island
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Good job Saeed. You need to put capital letters on all "proper nouns" like Circular Quay, and Cockatoo Island.
Did you take any photos while you were there?